Wesley

Nothing

8/27/2010

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Start to feel nervous
Losing all control
Do as I do and you will be fine
This is how we survive

There is nothing for you here
Nothing to be scared of
If you do not comply
You will turn into nothing

This is my kingdom
This is my territory
This is my place
This is nothing
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daniel link
9/9/2010 01:35:29 am

I think that your poem was interesting although it needed more description. If you were to add more words this would allow you to talk about your subject in your poem more.

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